the bass made my whole house shake lol

nice though
Vintage V-100, EMG 81&60
Chapman ML-1

Jet City JCA20H
I've finished this song now.

It doesn't have many metal elements now, I suppose it's more of just a nice song now.

I'm not happy with the outro - any suggestions on improving it would be greatly appreciated.

Also, the solo fill's a bit dodgy - it doesn't fit with the mood of the song particularly (this is probably because I didn't write it - my guitar playing friend did - I'm a bassist mainly)

N.B: I realise in Guitar Pro the verses and chorus sound fairly bare - but please try to imagine that there will be interesting vocals over the top. (i know it's hard :P)

Last edited by Gerbs at Nov 23, 2008,