Alright, so i'm back to trying to actually sing again

please critique for the music people you guys are, im more worried about the vocals than anything else.


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I only really listened to the vocals because you said to:

It sounds as if you've captured the gist of the song, the singing is good I just have to recommend extra attention on what notes Elliot hits and his phrasing, there were a few spots that could be better in that respect.
The vocals are pretty good, definitely get off key every once in awhile. All and all it's better than a lot of ES covers, good work.
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