#1
So i made 2 riffs
I'm thinkn of usin them both for intros to some songs
For some reason i can't post links to the exact mp3s so i'lpost the link to my mp3s
http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/padgea7x/music/
It's riff 1 and 2
Please crit
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#2
im not digging riff 1 tbh, i could maybe see it in a verse but it to me it has no melody
riff 2 sounds more like a intro, would sound good if after playing that riff twice you play it on the lower notes.
quality's pretty bad, using your phone or something?
Last edited by x Misanthropy x at Nov 15, 2008,
#3
Quote by x Misanthropy x
im not digging riff 1 tbh, i could maybe see it in a verse but it to me it has no melody
riff 2 sounds more like a intro, would sound good if after playing that riff twice you play it on the lower notes.


Yeah i was thinkin that bout plain riff2 for verse cept lower
So riff 1 as a verse. Riff 1 doesnt really floatmy boat either
Thanks!
They made me do push ups in drag

I'm gonna have a really hard time if we're both cannibals and racists.

Don't dress as a whore, he'll thump you.

I'm a firework, primed to go off
#4
there also a video that i'd like to crticised aswell u can't hear the first partat all
i was doin fast palm mutes but hey ho
what can you do if ya cant hear it? < get a better video recorder thats what
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fQViOnKs5uQ
They made me do push ups in drag

I'm gonna have a really hard time if we're both cannibals and racists.

Don't dress as a whore, he'll thump you.

I'm a firework, primed to go off
#5
Riff 1, really messy, I think. And you just should left-hand-tap those trills instead of picking them all.

riff 2, way better. But what if you play on the low string tuned to C or something. And play it slower. Or maybe a powerchord somewhere and not only 16th notes. Give it a better rythm with some 8th or something.
#6
Quote by MaXiMuse
Riff 1, really messy, I think. And you just should left-hand-tap those trills instead of picking them all.

riff 2, way better. But what if you play on the low string tuned to C or something. And play it slower. Or maybe a powerchord somewhere and not only 16th notes. Give it a better rythm with some 8th or something.


I could do that OR
I could palm mute all the open notes and not palm mute the higher notes
And yeah i could slow it down..
They made me do push ups in drag

I'm gonna have a really hard time if we're both cannibals and racists.

Don't dress as a whore, he'll thump you.

I'm a firework, primed to go off