#1
Alright, I broke down one night, and I didn't know why. The next day I wrote a song about it. It's a two part song. This is the lyrics in order, so some repeat.

Part I

Every day the sun tries to rise
Every day you act like it's a surprise

Overcome
By something I tried to cover up
Overdone
I'll just try another one

I can't tell you
What's going on for me
I can't tell you
All the colors that I see

Because I don't know
What's wrong with me
And I can't show
An emotion I don't believe

The sun came up today
I guess the sun is okay

Overcome
By something I tried to cover up
Overdone
I'll just try another one

I can't tell you
What's going on for me
I can't tell you
All the colors that I see

Part II

You try
To breakdown
Don't find what I found
Old at heart
Yet I'm to young
I'm bored
And ain't it fun
To die
or to try
To belive me
You can't see me
Anymore
So what are you fighting for
When you closed the door?
But how?
Come on out here now
And breakdown
I've found
A question for an answer

You can only rise if you fall
So what happens to the sun at night?
Who tries to call
And end my fight?

So now you've got to hide
So just give it time
You know you you're not right
So give up the fight
And reach for the light
Or you'll be gone
And they won't find you at down
You wonder what you found
When you broke down
And no one was around
Try to continue your life
And get by the strife
Don't take the knife
To you
When you don't know what to do
Or who to come to
On the line
Try to find
The question
Not subject to detention
So don't give up your pension
Just yet

You can only rise if you fall
What can you see at night?
Trying too hard to stand tall
Just give up the fight

A civil war
What am I fighting for
I don't know
Anymore
#5
Yeah it is actually really well written, brilliant job man!

Can't wait to hear it with music to go with it!
Gear:
-A Guitar
-A Bass Guitar
AND...
-amps for BOTH of them!!

(who cares?)
#12
woah nice
Quote by element4433
That happened to me once. Then I got in my flying car, flew home and made love to my wife, Scarlett Johansen.


Quote by RobertiusB
I've seen Lil' Wayne do some pretty technical solos tbh.
#13
Quote by Bryon Shea
yea...why are they all closed?


i think cus youre not allowed to post loads at one, but i stumbled across this section, and need to put up all my stuff

i'll have to systematically do it over time :'(