#2
you need heaps of work on that tab
and the bass needs heaps of work done as it is playing the song in the same frequency as the guitar
also make the song more defined by putting verses and chorus'
as well it is all to similar throughout the song try double notes and faster picking
#3
well, i will admit that the riffs do sound a bit similar and that the song could use a bit of work. But overall, its pretty damn catchy. (esp. the main riff, although it does sound a bit trite to me, to be perfectly honest. (i cant say that i've heard the riff before, but it sounds a bit familiar to me for some reason)). To summarize it best as i can, i like it. Nice job, man. A little bit of tweaking here and there, and it'd be a great song.
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