#1
bored in global issues class, and i wrote this.
comment please!



A Refreshing New View

<chorus>
You think
its what you need
(im not saving you i swear im not saving you)
you walk around so blind
when nothings ever fine

Say
what you mean
(you keep saying it but no ones ever hearing it)
write it on the walls
they're just more unanswered calls

<verse>
your hiding behind your self manufactured
misleading delusions
blocking yourself from all or any
sense of reasoning
theres only so much that i or anyone
can do to help you
I can see you fighting inside and i fear
that you're losing

<chorus>
You think
its what you need
(im not saving you i swear im not saving you)
you walk around so blind
when nothings ever fine

Say
what you mean
(you keep saying it but no ones ever hearing it)
write it on the walls
they're just more unanswered calls

<verse>
you need to believe everything happens for
strange reasons
Your finding escapes that bring you into even
deeper holes
youve got to find inside the reason that keeps you
still breathing
let yourself go, dont destroy yourself from the
inside out.

<chorus>
You think
its what you need
(im not saving you i swear im not saving you)
you walk around so blind
when nothings ever fine

Say
what you mean
(you keep saying it but no ones ever hearing it)
write it on the walls
they're just more unanswered calls

<bridge>
youve lost your way
forgot whats important
put everything aside
you wanna live like you meant it
push it away
find whats inside
so you will believe
what i do to

<chorus>
You think
its what you need
(im not saving you i swear im not saving you)
you walk around so blind
when nothings ever fine

Say
what you mean
(you keep saying it but no ones ever hearing it)
write it on the walls
they're just more unanswered calls


the light from outside a refreshing new view
on the same old sight

#2
I like it. It's kind of spiteful, but... then again, what writer isn't spiteful at times?

I can imagine the parenthetical lines being echoed over the preceding line in the background, kind of... back up vocal type things. Very nice.
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