#1
I Saw God Today

I saw god today raining terror upon household pets
I saw god today, I guess he needed a special treatment for these pets

I would like to see your kitchen tonight
Roast a bird in the oven, a bird without flight
Or we could cook the cat stuck up in the tree
Cats, cats we never need
Maybe we can roast the newly reposed pig hanging from the shower head
I guess he saw you leave

Nails permanently on a chalkboard
It kills you to live
Eating the flesh of a rotting pig
Can not be more distasteful than living the way you once did.

I would like to see your kitchen tonight
Roast a bird in the oven, a bird without flight
Or we could cook the cat stuck up in the tree
Cats, cats we never need
Maybe we can roast the newly reposed pig hanging from the shower head
I guess he saw you leave

I saw god today raining terror upon household pets
I saw god today, I guess he needed a special treatment for these pets
#2
in the end, this won me over. the thing that really threw me was the first two (and last two) lines. theyre laughable. maybe if you referred to them as 'his pets' of 'animals' or something...but i found it very hard to take it seriously. the other two stanzas though, are quite good. i would only suggest no repeating the word 'roast' from line 2 in line 5.
overall its quite good. ill give it a 6.5/10. with a few adjustments its easily an 8

c4c?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=999460