#1
Another song, and, no, I did not just write this, I've actually had the song recorded with my band for a few weeks and I decided to tab it out really fast. In case you're wondering why I'm having so many songs put up, it is because I am attempting to get feedback on the current songs and figure out how to fix them. I also know it is a very short song, but I would still like feedback.
Attachments:
The Funeral.zip
#2
Its very calm and relaxing, and i can definitely see (hear?) some strong, meaningful lyrics that can be applied to this song. The only thing i would change are some of the chord progressions. Don't get me wrong, they work great, and sound great... but they are kind of predictable and simple. Maybe picking notes outside of the chord in between will help solve that.

If you can, can u crit mine?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=17218396#post17218396
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