#1
This is the most personal song I have ever written. I actually cried while I was writing it. It's a very slow song. With a sad chord progression played under it.

Waiting For Eternity

Verse 1:

I'm here again
Wishing you could only see my way
I'm lost within
Waiting for someone to tell me what to say
I breathe you in
I start to feel like everything's alright
But I know the truth
I won't sleep tonight

Chorus:

Then I see your face
I'm satisfied loving you
In that moment of silence
I know nothing has ever been so true
The tears roll down
As I realize what you mean to me
But I can't go on
Waiting for eternity

Verse 2:

I fall apart
Healing just to break down
I cry out
Screaming without a sound
I feel so torn
Between my love, and my hearts desire
I tell myself I don't care
In the end, I'm just a liar

Chorus x1

*instrumental/solo*

Chorus x1
#2
sounds like something linkin park or staind would write... eeeh.
It's very upfront, there's little more to it than the surface, there's nowhere to dig... it's just what it is.

I'm not saying it's bad, I'm just saying it's fairly unidimensional.
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