#1
In all of my days, i have never really seen or heard a metal inspired piano piece... maybe i'm not looking in the right place, but i had to try it anyway.

its not done, i want it to repeat the first theme and end it the second theme eventually. for now though, i just want to know if im just wasting my time.

crit for crit of couse..
and be honest.... if i should scrap it.... or continue it...
Attachments:
Ravine.zip
Police were called to a daycare where a three-year-old was resisting a rest.
#2
Don't mistake this for cheapening your work, but you aren't covering any new ground here.

It is, however, well executed.
#4
i like where it goes at bar 17 and then again at bar 23 with the G major part.
the ascending part at bar 29 im not crazy for.
i love the caberet-like D minor dancey part at bar 31.
just for kicks i lowered the tempo to make it a little easier to play.
maybe add more then just backing octaves in the bass. it sounds like metal guitar doing rhythm powerchords and not piano.
#5
whats this? count drakula? it reminds me of the old sega games :P
but this is good .. but it still needs a guitar i say. .. oh i got it the second half reminds me of final fantasy ) so you could have been a music producer for that games good work i say, still its exotic here :P

crit me plz ty