#1
this is a song about my nana's town on the gulf coast of florida. if youve been to that part of the state, you know whats going on there...

i believe what wireman say
that whats not alive may be better off dead
and when it comes to the past, we all staack the deck
maybe its time that i stop being me
im a dried-up old lie of apathy
and lets not pretend that the worlds all its cracked up to be
this whol town is a tired excuse
full of fastfood joints and prostitutes
they all ask me to join, but im not sure im ready to

ive walked this line amillion times and its not sunny here anymore
and my boss says he aint got no legs and manasota's lost its charm
and my windows open every night cuz it gets pretty hot
and i dont think that itll get too cold out tonight.

the roundabout has got to go
and for 10 years now we aint seen no snow
we dont get too much of that here outside of the moving picture shows
the rednecks have their hemis and their tree hammocks
and the trust fund kids have their coke habits
and the only difference between a drag and a dairy queen is the dick
the big picture isnt really relevant here
theyre paving over everything i hold dear
george's place has burned down 3 times since last year.

ive walked this line amillion times and its not sunny here anymore
and my boss says he aint got no legs and manasota's lost its charm
and my windows open every night cuz it gets pretty hot
and i dont think that itll get too cold out tonight.
#2
These are probably the best lyrics I've read on this site.

Very nicely done.
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#4
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this is a song about my nana's town on the gulf coast of florida. if youve been to that part of the state, you know whats going on there...

i believe what wireman say
that whats not alive may be better off dead
and when it comes to the past, we all staack the deck
maybe its time that i stop being me
good line
im a dried-up old lie of apathy
and lets not pretend that the worlds all its cracked up to be
this whol town is a tired excuse
full of fastfood joints and prostitutes
haha nice one
they all ask me to join, but im not sure im ready to

ive walked this line amillion times and its not sunny here anymore
and my boss says he aint got no legs and manasota's lost its charm
and my windows open every night cuz it gets pretty hot
and i dont think that itll get too cold out tonight.
not a big fan of the last two lines

the roundabout has got to go
and for 10 years now we aint seen no snow
we dont get too much of that here outside of the moving picture shows
the rednecks have their hemis and their tree hammocks
and the trust fund kids have their coke habits
good comparison of the rednecks and trust fund kids
and the only difference between a drag and a dairy queen is the dick
the big picture isnt really relevant here
theyre paving over everything i hold dear
george's place has burned down 3 times since last year.

ive walked this line amillion times and its not sunny here anymore
and my boss says he aint got no legs and manasota's lost its charm
and my windows open every night cuz it gets pretty hot
and i dont think that itll get too cold out tonight.


all in all this was decent, except for a few lines i mentioned i didn't like too much but the piece was good overall. There are a few typos in there so I would def. check them over but nice job.

Peace out,
Matlock