It's pretty good. The vocal harmonies could be worked out, and a bit louder.

But anyways, awesome job dude.
Thanks for the advise man, We'll keep the loudness issue in mind next recording.
I like where it's going. Vocal style reminds me of The Strokes and Portugal. The Man. In terms of advice I think you should experiment with thickening the vocals especially toward the end, have someone else sing the same thing with you or overlap yourself. Also, you might find some inspiration from Minus the Bear, check out the song Knights and Michio's Death Drive.