so it's not finished, a little repetitive still, but i'm sorting it all out.

the rhythmic riff sounds a bit too staccatoed out and doesn't roll as much as when i'm playing, but this is the basic idea.

just let me know your thoughts on it. thanks.

EDIT: not to be arrogant on my work here, but all the views and no replies is really bad plagiarism etiquette. at least say something before you steal a riff.
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Sounds pretty good. Nothing really astounding and original, but it definitely has a pretty good sound. I'd like to hear this when there's more added to it.
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