Very nice, sounds very much like FATA.

I won't go into detail, nothing really wrong.
Keep up the insane writing.

I deeply regret the 6661 in my username. Siiiigh. Damn you, 14 year old me, you edgy little bastard.
i liked it..

but i think it got a bit repetitive.

i think you could fix that if you put a little more effort into it.

or maybe it wont even matter with vocals over it.

and i think the ending should end in a tapping thing.

what i did is at bar 79, i did 16th note triplets going 11-6-2

then bar 80, 13-6-2, then bar 81, 14-6-2, then bar 82 16-6-2, then halfway through 18-6-2

then i think it should end in a palm mute. just sounds cool imo

anyways, just little things


although it sounds repetitive, it's cool with scream vocals all over the part..
I didn't end the song with tapping because it sounds a bit weak in my ears. I want the ending more intense and end the song with the intro verse too..

Thanks for your crit.