#2
I'll be honest, not completely to my taste. I think they need to be louder and a bit... shoutier? I can't think of a better word. Depends what exactly you're aiming for really. Not bad, 6/10.

Crit one of my GP songs in my sig or covers in my profile? cheers.

wrong forum btw mate.
Gear:
Schecter C-1 Hellraiser
Ibanez GRG170DX
Peavey Vypyr 75
Fender Princeton 650 DSP w/ Celestion 80w speaker