#1
Song.

I made it in Riffworks, and it mixed it weird, so the volume fluctuates ever so slightly and it's kinda quiet. And I know my guitar tone is very shrill and "buzzy". I apologize.
C4C.

Rate and comment, or whatever.
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#2
this is really nice. 1.20-something and 2.40 might want to be a little filled up, though, the only-rhythm-guitar feels kind of empty, seeing the gap between the solos is pretty long. Everything else is good except, yeah, the buzzy recording.
#3
Thank you.

I'm going to write lyrics and expand the song later, so lyrics were meant to go in those spaces. The name probably won't stick either. I just needed a good metal-sounding song name on the spot, lol.

I'm trying to find a less high-end prominent tone so it won't sound as bad when I re-do it.

Thanks for the crit!
~don't finkdinkle when ur supposed to be dimpdickin~