#1
Gabba gabba bitch,
there's a long line of historic evidence
to prove the existence of douche bags,
t-rex,
genghis khan,
shakespeare (don't deny it)
and Dude-olf Hitler. They keep coming too!
girls # 17-24 were all awful, but to be
fair, none of them had that swooping
scene hair that I'm attracted too.

in a more serious turn of events:
cancer! it happens, but
i have a feeling no one cares,
i cared twice actually: this girl
Heil the red robot, and another
caught between a sandstorm and
baby powder. it was interesting,
turned one was lying and the other
just had a zit inside her ovaries. Good poetry though.
Goood poetry.

does anyone
	    remember
	when writing like you
		h
		  a
		    d
		       epileptic fingers
	was 
		such
			and
	awesome
		   idea.      i mean, i could write
	any
 	   thing...and have it sound cryptic and emotional:
				watch...


pamplet 23:
		a carpet is any
			loom-woven, felted textile
	or
		g
		r
		a
		s
		s floor covering.
				 the term was also
used for table and wall coverings,
		as carpets were not
				c
				 o
				  m
				   m
				    o
				     n
				      l
				       y
					   used on the floor
in 
   EUROPEAN INTERIORS
	UNTIL	
		the 18th century.


decorating cabbage drops of
remembirthing, i can't name
any time in my life where
nostalgia is an illness. I've
felt sick
for a long time, trying to
remember why I felt
this way for her, but in the
end there is no answer, besides
what I used to go through
just to make her happy,
or angry,
or miserable,
or jealous. because love
is the largest russian
doll I know.
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#2
Wow, that was a bit confusing or something vague! But reading it again I found strangely interesting and catchy!
#4
remembirthing made me giggle.

I felt that this was two separate poems. the first, comprised of the everything preceding the final stanza, was hilarious and honest. I loved it.

The final stanza here describes the way I've been feeling lately so perfectly -- so, so perfectly. I loved that even more.
#5
Typo, in the code box: "was such and awesome idea."? An, possibly?

Apart from that, a really enjoyable read, very out of the ordinary on here. Love it.