#2
Well, the recording was so bad I couldn't listen for long as it was making my ears bleed. Sounded ok, but a bit generic, and I wasn't a fan of the vocals to be honest. How did you record this?
There is poetry in despair.
#5
Its got life. The drums are really solid and the guitar fits well. In terms of criticism i think the could use some urgency every once in a while, otherwise it stars to drone. Also you should mess around a little and experiment with the structure. If you listen to enough music from the genre you can predict whats gonna come next a lotta times - throw us a curveball somewhere in there, explode.

c4c?

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