#1
Still needs some work, just a general idea.

'Skeletons'

Skeletons on the orange sky
Waiting for some rain
I’m in here wondering why
I’m on the very last train

‘Cause she’s like the sunset
I see from this railway line
I’ve seen her a thousand days
She still stuns me every time

It’s skeletons, it’s skeletons
In old, old towns
Of old, old friends

Clouds form in the reddening sky
To merge and make your name
The air is bitter, I can see my breath
Above me it spells the same

It’s skeletons, it’s skeletons
In old, old towns
Of old, old friends

All the trees are naked
Waiting for the change
Maybe the sun will rise
And they’ll feel alive again
#3
Reminds me of Alkaline Trio songs. I don't know if thats good or bad.

It's good, but it needs another... "section", because right now there are two, the verse and the chorus, and i think the structure will get boring and same-y if you carry on. Write a bridge/break and set a definitive structure.