#1
Strike down through the solitary artery.
Advance Forth and head towards the Hale of Carking Cannonade.

I cast my arbalest and set off the silence!
Picket in Impunity! "TOUR DE FORCE" ITS DONE!

"TOUR DE FORCE" ITS DONE!
Accede! God Relinguish or see to the Abyss!
"TOUR DE FORCE" ITS DONE!

Breach thy Facade
Position....
Position the rest

Breach thy Facade
Position....
Now Position your rest

Witching hour's arrive.
Seep into Isolation Position the end.

Cant part for the martyrdom anymore.

No respect for the Conscript
No respect for the Conscript

Admit.
#2
The random capitalization of the first letters of some words got on my nerves.

It was good, but the way you wrote this really left lots unexplained. I don't really know, I just don't quite understand the style.

And at points, it seemed to jump from idea to idea with almost no sense of flow.