#1
This is chill song me and my friend recorded. Its a really really really rough run, but i just want to know if i should continue with strong lyrics over it or not.
The drums were kind of experimental. With off beat snares. Recording was through a rock band mic ( ) into my laptop into Audacity... so its not the greatest, but it sounds decent.

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#2
Amazing stuff. Timing's a bit sketchy in some parts, but nothing to really detract from the quality of the piece...

I like the drums too, catchy, consistent, and yet different. Great guitar melody.
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#4
Timing is a tad off in places, Liking how the intro goes into a chord progression and then the drums kick in. Quite effective.

Who played those drums? or was it artificial.
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#5
my friend played the drums, i played the guitar. thanks for the comments, im going to try to record a vocal line soon with some deep lyrics to fit the mood of the song.
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