#1
An angel wrapped itself in newspaper
Begged for sun beneath the snow
Inches piled on its tattered wings
As it huddled in the shelter of a shattered glow

It drained through broken stained glass
From within there came a shout
The angel too drunk, incoherent
Ended his fifteen second drought

Pristine as the snowfall around him
And the bottle broke free of his cling
He assumed anatomic position
And was found in the same at next spring

But in those last seconds of glory
Made the angel in snow a white clone
As the numbness crept in to embrace him
By churchlight he died not alone

Vapour arose with a grey coloured dawn
To ascend, the snow angel above
But she melted away with his dying embrace
Tired, numb, and too drunk to make love
#2
Quote by Radical Bob
An angel wrapped itself in newspaper
Begged for sun beneath the snow
Inches piled on its tattered wings
As it huddled in the shelter of a shattered glow

It drained through broken stained glass
From within there came a shout
The angel too drunk, incoherent
Ended his fifteen second drought

Pristine as the snowfall around him
And the bottle broke free of his cling
He assumed anatomic position
And was found in the same at next spring

But in those last seconds of glory
Made the angel in snow a white clone
As the numbness crept in to embrace him
By churchlight he died not alone

Vapour arose with a grey coloured dawn
To ascend, the snow angel above
But she melted away with his dying embrace
Tired, numb, and too drunk to make love


definately awesome,

few parts where i was kind of confused..

ended his 15 second drought,

assumed the anatomic position..

but it was pretty sweet, ill re-read a few more times to see what tha hells going on..haha
#4
Very sick bro, chilling.

Although I agree with Balkan those two lines are confusing, but if they make sense to you, then it's all good.
#5
The content was good, but I can't help thinking that the rhyme scheme has restricted a potentially much better work.
#6
Ended 15 second drought = he took a drink
Assumed anatomic position = scientific term basically just means a guy laid out flat