#1
http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Small+Toaster/ (Full volume for thourough Enjoyment)

It features a Phaser on a Bass guitar and some artificial drums.

What do you think? (be sure to check the lyrics)

C4C
Gear:

Vintage V940 Active
Ashdown Perfect 10
Line6 Toneport UX1
Acousitca Mixcraft 3.1


XBL GT: EdwardThornly
PSN ID: InfertileShrew


The True story to Jesus
Last edited by Small Toaster at Nov 24, 2008,
#3
definitely a cool sounding bass effect. I would use the first couple seconds of this for a really cool intro. As far as the whole song goes, it was kind of random and didnt really fit to a scale. But definitely very cool tone and sound, and i can see this being an intro to a very heavy song. The drums sounded really cool too, where did you get those?

if you can, can you check out mine?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1006232

EDIT: it reminded me of a rave party. i can definitely see people poppin' some X, and sitting back in their seats listening to this for days in a row....
Police were called to a daycare where a three-year-old was resisting a rest.
Last edited by dontbestupid47 at Nov 24, 2008,
#5
Thanks for the crit. Great tone on the bass. I agree with the guy above. It should be shorter and be an intro to a heavy song as towards the end it did get a little random. I loved the tone though.
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#6
Thanks, I know there are some arrangement issues.

I got the drums from Acoustica Beatcraft.

What scale should I use? Minor? Major? Pentatonic?
Gear:

Vintage V940 Active
Ashdown Perfect 10
Line6 Toneport UX1
Acousitca Mixcraft 3.1


XBL GT: EdwardThornly
PSN ID: InfertileShrew


The True story to Jesus
#7
ok, this song has a lot of potential but, i agree with dontbestupid47
i think you could use the first seconds for a intro, try to arrange some of the other parts into a consistent organization like intro/verse/chorus/verse/ etc
if you can, get a guitar just to add some variety, nothing big. and you could use the more progressive parts for some awesome solos. i really like this as it is but, if you tried to do a mre complete song, it would be awesome.

also, the drums are really cool and the bass tone.. just plain awesome.. really good work

and if you want some collaborators for the song, i'll apply lol
if you have some time can you critic back:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1006534&highlight=something+lol