#1
this aint shootin hoops. i'll leave u spinnin like a twenty pence piece or a quarter do
i'll murder you. u'll b leavin this place jus a disgrace like the french did at waterloo.
leave u black n blue. ur fifteen minutes of fame will be displayed on radio stations via news crews
at a quarter to. they'll b luvin u.
#3
Great. More rappers talking about things they've most likely never done. All it needs to be totally cliche is something said about your rims and a picture of a fat girl's ass below it.
Do you feel warm within your cage?

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#7
You use the same rhyme too many times. It's pretty distracting.

I hated "leave you spinning like a twenty pence piece or a quarter". It was boring and unimaginative.
#8
Quote by 12eTa1217e17
what have i said i've done? i haven't stated i have done anything if you read carefully..

I didn't say you implied that you did them if you read carefully. I said "More rappers talking about things they probably haven't done.
Do you feel warm within your cage?

And have you figured out yet -


Life goes by?
Quote by Hydra150
There's a dick on Earth, too
It's you
#9
Quote by MrArgo
umm....rap sucks end of story goodbye


no it doesnt. dont be a dick.


this however, isnt one of hip hops high points.

technically you cant even call it "rhymes" because theres only one of them.

its all just cliches, and the waterloo thing just gave me an abba vibe. not what you want in hip hop.

also one thing that bothered me was the twenty pence/quarter part.

are you english or american?
if you're english stay away from the blatant americanisms. be UKHH, ya get me, blud...
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