#1
I don't really care what it's all about,
I don't really care who made the skies,
After all of your words, all I do is just sigh,

I don't really care who is god,
I don't really care if I'm right or wrong,
All I do all time is just sit and play this song.

I'll leave as quietly as I came.

All I'll do is drink and toke,
When they ask who stood up,
They'll say I never spoke.

I don't care were jesus went,
I don't care were darwin sailed,
Just leave me at my perch,
Down at the bar,
Don't come search.

All I'll do is lay and breathe,
I don't play along with any team,
We're all just the same.

I'll leave as quietly as I came.


Wrote it whilst drunk, I don't know.
#2
Quote by Deadmen
I don't really care what it's all about,
I don't really care who made the skies,
After all of your words, all I do is just sigh, Take just out and its a good line and good verse

I don't really care who is god,
I don't really care if I'm right or wrong,
All I do all time is just sit and play this song. first two lines in this stanza are good but the last one has got to go

I'll leave as quietly as I came.

All I'll do is drink and toke,
When they ask who stood up,
They'll say I never spoke. this whole stanza is very good i like it

I don't care were jesus went,
I don't care were darwin sailed,
Just leave me at my perch,
Down at the bar,
Don't come search. everything would be really god with out the "down at the bar" in there take that line out and its good

All I'll do is lay and breathe,
I don't play along with any team,
We're all just the same.

I'll leave as quietly as I came. last stanza is good, i liked how you used ill leave as quietly as i came as the end since it was in other places aswell


Wrote it whilst drunk, I don't know.



crit mine its on the front page its called "sheep"