#2
Sounds great man. What I liked the most was your use of rhythm with the leads. It fit in with the overall groove very well. Only point for improvement I would say would be to try and make the leads a little less repetitive. Sounds like you are more or less going up and down the same scale (sounded like pentatonic but I could be wrong) throughout the entire song which really isn't a bad thing, it just kind of makes it predictable in a way.

overall I enjoyed it though, keep it up dude.

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