#1
I'd never felt like that before
seeing your bags at the door
left me feeling lower than the floor
why did you have to go?

you piled reasons like the bills
told me you were unfulfilled
the day you made my world stand still
why did you break my heart?
#2
It was good, simplistic, but the rhyme scheme verged on terribly cheesy, along with the rhythm. I guess that was kind of the point, but it annoyed me, and it felt like you put almost no thought into this.