#1
This is my first recording, but It was also in an unfamiliar key so I kept tripping up on my own fingers. Any criticism would be appreciated and returned. Hopefully I'll have many recordings to come that don't suck.

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#2
i liked it all alot, but we can hear where u tripped over yourself like you said. practice the harmonic minor and the stuff itself to get rid of that nad it will be really good.
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#3
The mixing was kind of weird. The drums were almost impossible to hear. I know the lead is the main focus here, but maybe you should turn up the drums a bit.

You're not a bad guitarist by any means. You've got loads of potential. The reason for the mistakes, as you said, is that the scale is new to you. Just practice with it some more until you've really got the hang of it.

I like where you're going with this track. Just need a little practice and touching up. This has the potential to be a really great track.
"On this life that we call home
The years go fast
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."
#4
thanks The recording must have been crap because there were no drums
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#5
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thanks The recording must have been crap because there were no drums


Seriously? Oh ****.... I must be hearing things again.
"On this life that we call home
The years go fast
and the days go so slow...

the days go so slow
."