#1
Here's a little tune I started last night and finished today. I don't know what genre it would be classified as, melodic metal? And the drums arn't that good because I can't drum, and this is the first time I've wrote drums in Guitar Pro.

C4C
Attachments:
Glass Mug.zip
Last edited by B00bs at Nov 26, 2008,
#2
You've shown some pretty sweet ideas in this piece, I really liked when you introduced the synth at bar 15, but as you said the drums are sounding very bare and I think you should definitely work on that, also a good bass line would work very well here. Easily the best part of this song for me was the solo, awesome stuff there. One more thing I think you should try and work on is try not to get too repetitive, and as for the genre, I'm not sure if I'd call it Melodic Death. C4C? Mine's in my sig.

EDIT: Holy crap, I'm a retard, I've had the wrong link in my sig this whole time, it's been fixed now.
Last edited by SOADisdabest at Nov 28, 2008,
#3
This is a pretty cool piece. Especially liked the octaves in the chorus bits.

I don't really have much to add to what the guy above me said, he sums it up pretty well. Nice synth, AWESOME solo, sometimes a bit repetitive.