#4
Well... I would have to agree that is kind of boring. An intro should catch the listeners attention and keep them listening. Honestly, if this came on my iPod, I'd probably skip it after about 15 seconds or so.

Touch it up and add to it. You could turn this into something good but it'll need some work.
"On this life that we call home
The years go fast
and the days go so slow...

the days go so slow
."
#6
It wasn't terrible but it could definetily use work. It was a little slow and repetitive. I liked the very beginning but after that it was kinda slow. if you sped it up a little it would sound better.