#1
Hey there. First attempt at writing a ragtime tune.
Tell me what you think and also what I could improve on. Thanks much, C4C.
Attachments:
Ragged Time.zip
Quote by sheumack111
I allways found that having sex while listening to Tool/Planet X/Dream Theater was hard because every time you tryed o keep the beat they would change time sig, then you would get pissed off and then loose your mojo for the nite.....

I fucking Lol'd
#2
Its so good to see something on these forums that isn't *insert metal/hardcore subgenre here* Congrats man, you really nailed the essence of the ragtime sound. The second half is great, I wasn't a fan of some of the dissonance in the first half, like in bars 5 and 6. Still, this is a great piece.

Can you crit my piece?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1007118
#3
Yea i agree with the guy above. At last something that isnt metal.

I dont really know about the genre youre piece is on, but it sounds lovely.
Bars 5-8 sounded strange compared to the rest of the piece, so something else could possibly be done there. But the rest sounds amazing.

Could you suggest ideas upon mine please?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=17354856#post17354856
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#5
You live my song? :B Baha.
Thanks for all the compliments. It's really encouraging and helps me motivate myself to keep going.
Quote by sheumack111
I allways found that having sex while listening to Tool/Planet X/Dream Theater was hard because every time you tryed o keep the beat they would change time sig, then you would get pissed off and then loose your mojo for the nite.....

I fucking Lol'd