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I've been writing lyrics for a few months now and have been playing guitar for around 2 years. I've made a few riffs to go along with songs and even tried to complete a few of them but this is the first real one that I've recorded with vocals. Keep in mind: I don't sing at all and you can tell when you listen. This was my first go as well, I know I can clean it up a bit, especially when I change chords and it has that jarring sliding sound. But I'd appreciate any feedback.

You might have to turn up your speakers a bit, I used a really ****ty mic connected to my computer.

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