#3
Very good. Different, eccentric. Like Solemn Silence said, it doesn't sound finished. Just bass and drums. I'd love to hear a finished product with more instruments in the mix.
"On this life that we call home
The years go fast
and the days go so slow...

the days go so slow
."
#4
I think it would be cool if later in the song you put some distortion into the guitar and thickened the bass.
#6
i agree. this would sound good with real instruments and loads of distortion. but it's a good base to build a song on. c4c right?