#1
Words don’t match actions
Actions don’t match intentions
Intentions don't match thoughts
Thoughts don’t match feelings
Disharmonious.
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#2
I like it, but the rhythm of it is a little choppy. Is it a poem,m or song? A work in progress?
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#3
poem
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#4
Yeah rythm is off, still good though
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#5
its supposed to be disjointed
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