#1
Just incase you dont understand how this song is done. Its very upbeat. With a jazz/skat feeling.

UPDATE: Song can be heard in my profile!

I just need help finishing it....

Time for change
By: Cody Howard

Some call it a place
full of happiness and bliss, ohh no
I call it hell cause i know that
it aint worth a ****.

Governments controlling populations
using fear and desperation,
doing anything to make a buck
do you really think they give a ****? ohh no

its time to open our eyes
to see the world in dismay, ohh yeah
media filtration and
information deprivation,

Chorus;
I stand here as a single man
willing to stand against all odds
from this world full of corruption
deception and destruction
will you stand with me?

Believe a thing or two cause
every lie is made of truth, ohh yeah
but dont be naive
to the things you see,

ohh noooohohoho

oh no no no no no

oh noooohohhoho

ohh no no no noo no no no

Chorus

When everything you know is a lie,
the truth tends to hurt yeah

When everything you know is a lie,
the truth tends to hurt

Its time to open up your eyes,
its time to see through these lies
Last edited by Cody.Guitarist at Nov 29, 2008,
#2
When I started this, I kind of felt like it was another 'Bomb The System' deal.
I personally like it and I would love to hear it.
I like your word choices and I see that you have a point behind this song.
KatehMonster
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#5
I want to here the music. It was a little punky in places, which I dislike but you can't please everyone. Good word flow, maybe a wider word use, but solid 7/10.
#7
Quote by Cody.Guitarist
Music is in my profile.


It's a pretty bad recording. But you get the general idea.


I listened to it and I like where you are going with it so far.
Nicely done.
KatehMonster
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#8
Thanks,

I really should make a new recording. It was pretty difficult to play that style of riff, read my lyrics and sing at the same time.

Next one I do in the studio and it should sound better.