#1
The first one that I've actually posted. I kind of wrote it while I was laying in bed before I fell asleep, so it isn't that great really. Enjoy anyways. Critiques are welcomed.
This is more of an acoustic song, sorry metal heads. =]

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Verse 1:
Yesterday you thanked me
Because I comforted you while you cried
Tomorrow morning when you wake up
You won't be thankful anymore

You might never know that I cared
But you will know that I couldn't stay
I have never known the reason why I run so far away

Chorus:
I'm burning bridges
All the time
I don't care if this can't be undone
Because I know when a chance comes up
Another bridge will just crash down

Verse 2:
Sometimes I don't think I have a reason
For walking away from everything
Maybe it's just that I can't find my own inner peace
But suddenly I look up, then I realize
That over that bridge that's burning
I still see you on the other side

Chorus:
I'm burning bridges
All the time
I don't care if this can't be undone
Because I know when a chance comes up
Another bridge will just crash down
KatehMonster
Quote by Nilpferdkoenig
Dude, if you were a lesbian asking out another lesbian in a man forum we would be going crazy too.
Quote by zerosystem
just because you're a girl and you get more pussy than me doesn't give you the right to brag.
#3
Quote by train wreck
beautiful, i find no critique at all. keep them coming!

Thank you very much. I will. =]
KatehMonster
Quote by Nilpferdkoenig
Dude, if you were a lesbian asking out another lesbian in a man forum we would be going crazy too.
Quote by zerosystem
just because you're a girl and you get more pussy than me doesn't give you the right to brag.
#4
The stay/away rhyme in verse 1 made me cringe.

Kill that, and I'll be happy because its great.
#5
Quote by ginjaninja
The stay/away rhyme in verse 1 made me cringe.

Kill that, and I'll be happy because its great.


M'kay, I did think about that for a while, but I just said 'What the hell' and didn't bother to change it.
Thank you.
KatehMonster
Quote by Nilpferdkoenig
Dude, if you were a lesbian asking out another lesbian in a man forum we would be going crazy too.
Quote by zerosystem
just because you're a girl and you get more pussy than me doesn't give you the right to brag.