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Hey guys, just finished this song the other day - finished writing the music too, so thought I'd see what you thought of the lyrics. Crit for crit - leave a link and I'll be happy to see yours too!

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Oi Oi Sportsfans

(Verse 1)
Helios retreats to the end
Of the horizon once again
The sun descends and falls underneath
The skyline’s jaw of jagged teeth.

And from the shadows a baffling twilight race
Emerges from caverns and caves to show its face
But I can’t see them any more...


(Verse 2)
With banter, lash, and their collars north
The pretentious f*cks can all go forth
With bulky frames for their tribal art
The laddish pricks can all depart.

Showing off wide tracts of skin won’t buy your dreams
At best all you get is a spike in self-esteem
But I’m not drawn in any more...


(Chorus)
In a court where I used to crawl I now find myself among Kings
And all my former sensibilities have died a death and don’t mind these things.
Now the nosebleed seats seem so far away.
And if the Gods concede, it’s there they shall remain.