#1
ok. so i made a rough draft of a song today but (like most of the songs i make without any lyrics in mind) its just random instrumental. does anyone have any advice /suggestions about where/what to add for verses/choruses/whatever?

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#2
Try posting in the Lyrics section as well but sometimes I just hum a melody to an idea I have and see what comes up and then see if some words come to mind and if they give me a feel for what to put in.
Also sometimes I have to alter the structure of an idea to make it easier to fit say a an intro/verse/chorus/verse/chorus/verse middle/chorus to end as a really simple song template but of course this can change as well as the song develops.

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