#1
Any criticism would really help. Thanks!

Psychological I know
Those words can dig themselves a whole
I'd never dig them out
Or give them to anyone.

Those words are thrown around
Each time thrown they spiral down
They lose touch and meaning
I will not let that happen to me

But I'll try saying them now
I just can't hold it in
Patience is thin.
I never thought I'd say them to
Anyone let alone you
But do, oh do I ever tell the truth.

Back and forth my heart and mind
I have no say all they do's fight
One never lets one win.
I can't even begin to say
How I do, yet it's not true
The words continue sinking down
I'd try to dig but I don't know how

But I'm saying these words now
I just won't hold it in
Patience is thin.
I never thought I'd say them to
Anyone let alone you
But do, oh do I ever tell the truth.

Psychological I know
Those words have dug themselves a whole and
I'll never dig them out
Or give them to anyone.
#3
Whats dig themselves a whole?
Do u mean to say that?
Or do u mean a hole?

But other than that its cool how it repeats the beginning part. and the third part sort of.
Its pretty dark. and deep.
esp. about the words....
good job! Is this for a song? Or just like poetry?

You could go longer with it, write a few more verses. If you wanted to.