I hope it's nice^^

I personally liked it
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What's going with the rhythm guitar? I muted the lead guitar (which is great btw) and it sounds weird. You should definitely work in the rhythm guitar timing, or measures or whatever the problem is. Everything else is ok. Just remember that if you change the rhythm you gotta change the bass line too.
Its great to see something other than metal posted on here.

I agree with person above.
The rhythm guitar is a bit weird, just make the timing of it better.