#1
As you walk on your way home
You walk your way all alone
There’s something about you
That I cant understand

Why should you be all alone?

I go up to talk to you
I see a smile forming
You tell me
Gotta promise me this
You wont fall in love

As you walk on your way home
You walk your way all alone
There’s something about you
That I cant understand

I walk you to your home
Why cant you be my own?
You tell me
I just don’t love you like that
Its kind of a simple fact

I would sing you songs all day
Just to get you to love me
Guess I don’t keep promises
As well as I should

Why should you be all alone?

As you walk on your way home
You walk your way all alone
There’s something about you
That I cant understand
#2
I'm not quite sure why, but I got the country song feel from this. It's not a bad thing, I'm just talking about how I felt while I was reading.
I think that it's simple, but that's a good thing.
Not too bad. =]
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#3
Simplistic, but nice.
Its one of those songs people, well, I can really connect with.
Nothing bad to say, it has its purpose and it fulfills it.
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#4
i think certain repititions spoil it abit..."As you walk on your way home" and in the next stanza "I walk you to your home."
But, then again, im not to experianced, and it could be a writing technigue im not familiar with.