#1
I spent a three day trip on a Greyhound bus and I lost my shit,
So I dumped my bags on the filthy floor and walked with my fingernail clippers.
With the file extended I sliced the shirts off burdensome men,
Wrapped their faces like seaweed pieces and carved shit-eaten grins.
When military complex dictates shit from common sense,
The past nosedives into the present tense and girls stroke their clits accordingly.
When dead highway children are remembered with Christmas reefs on metal rails,
Is when true geniuses write like crippled snails.
"Are you just as vile as the words suggest?"
"Is your dick as fat as what your sex projects?"
"Is every tooth a horse's hoof to race down flesh?"
"Is every shirt from here on out to be made of tasteless, gaudy mesh?"

From grizzly bears with dirty hair and scruff
To lanky boys and psychedelic drugs.
Hefty folds to wrap your arms to hug
Traded for spines and collarbones to suck.
I chased dinner with a glass of Listerine.
This is all a little more than just a lucid dream.
These days I can shit through metallic screen.
There were 6 months when all we drank was Eliot Ness.
There were 6 months when all we drank was moonshine.
There were 6 months when we were broke as Hell and I came down real hard.
I want my lips on your neck to be your every reason to stay.
I want to lay with you and blast ourselves from Fucktown to outer space.
But I stand behind my beard because it's the only thing on my face that
seems to be flourishing these days.
And I will never ever get to go to outer space as long as I live,
So the ocean is the closest to the infinite that I will ever have.
Poor advice.
Last edited by stellar_legs at Dec 1, 2008,
#3
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...........
riiiiiiiiiiiiiight......
have u considered counseling?
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#7
He's back again, and back with the anger. You have an instantly recognisable style, and i always love reading your stuff, but this just struck me more as a mindless out pouring of anger and rage than an actual story. But that didn't stop it being ****ing fantastic
#8
But I stand behind my beard because it's the only thing on my face that
seems to be flourishing these days.

nice man, very nice. pretty much everything in here is quotable.
#12
You're undeserving of all those ****ty comments.

This definitely seems more open than your usual stuff.

I definitely really ****ing like it though. Really, man.
マリ「しあわっせはーあるいってこないだーからあるいってゆっくんだねーん 
いっちにっちいっぽみーかでさんぽ
 さーんぽすすんでにっほさっがるー 
じーんせいはっわんつー!ぱんち・・・


"Success is as dangerous as failure. Hope is as hollow as fear." - from Tao Te Ching

#13
You never seem to disappoint me.

And try not to sweat the idiots, they're everywhere nowadays.
#16
First this outburst of emotions, and then:

**** you, cocksucker.


Brilliant.
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#17
You, and NG13... blah blah blah whatever he's called are the two writers who are sincerely look forward to on UG. Enough ass licking...

This was written for my brother, I just know it was. Maybe you are my brother in secret? Maybe he's been on this site for 5 years and I've not realised?

- "So I dumped my bags on the filthy floor and walked with my fingernail clippers." - This line - and of course, the ending - stuck out to me like unkept fingernails. "Fingernail clippers" is just such a sad sentiment. You combined sadness and anger perfectly.

I don't know what the hell I'm supposed to say to this without kissing your toes. Saying that, I don't like the section in Italics. It just seemed like nonsense to me, when it should of been a break from the nonsense, allowing the security to hinder in. Every piece requires a little of it to keep the reader seated neatly, in my opinion.

That is all, for now.
#18
what a tour de force of anger.

this is about as perfect as such an outburst can get.
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#19
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what a tour de force of anger.

this is about as perfect as such an outburst can get.


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