#1
Dio and a little Van Halen Inspired
For the Acoustic solos inspired by Death (Crystal Mountain)
I Love it a lot, and you?

C4C?
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My Pain.zip
R.I.P.
Chuck Schuldiner 1967-2001
Ronnie James Padavona 1942-2010
Darrell Lance Abbott 1966-2004
Jon Nödtveidt 1975-2006
Per Yngve Ohlin 1969-1991
Øystein Aarseth 1968-1993
Joe Ptaceck 1973-2010
Ace Börje Thomas Forsberg 1966-2004
#2
Good, riffs are cool, but please, vary stuff! The two acoustic solos are very similar-sounding, and indeed use the same kind of ideas each time (picked chords both times - necessary?), and coupled with straightforward verse-chorus-verse, it becomes a little dull after a while... especially when you repeat the first solo at the end, note for note.

Basically, you have a collection of good riffs and tunes, even a good vocal melody, but you need to spice things up. The bridge is somewhat better as you put some new stuff in, but other than that there's way, way too much repetition.

6.5/10

(sorry if this seems a little harsh)