#1
ive been playing for about an year and ive decided to make a song.......its simple....not very cmplex......any opinions would be apreciated...
Attachments:
The song.zip
#2
Not bad...
Work More on the tempo and don't repeat the same chords lot of times
Good Arpeggios but repetitive, work on more arpeggios
Try To make a lead track with a simple solo.
Give A Rhythm to the chords

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https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1011985
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