ive been playing for about an year and ive decided to make a song.......its simple....not very cmplex......any opinions would be apreciated...
The song.zip
Not bad...
Work More on the tempo and don't repeat the same chords lot of times
Good Arpeggios but repetitive, work on more arpeggios
Try To make a lead track with a simple solo.
Give A Rhythm to the chords

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