#1
she keeps on falling in love
and right now she's falling apart
she swears she's rising above
but he's just breaking her heart
she thinks he's sent from above
she smiles while her heart's torn apart

she don't need to love you
cuz' your love is not true
and She don't need to hold you
cuz' your heart is still blue
just face it, face it
your love is a lie
she'll find another guy
someday
someway--

she tries this loving again
it's no use she's suffering
you don't even know the pain
you broke her heart again
she losing herself in this
she's someone you'll be sure to miss

Chorus-

-Bridge- 1x
just face it, just face it
your love is a lie
she'll find another guy
someday
someway--
Chorus 2x(first time softly second time hard)
someday
#2
The rhyming of words to themselves made this boring and repetitive, especially you/true/you/blue, and again//pain/again. Write without rhymes, see how you get on.
Last edited by ginjaninja at Dec 2, 2008,
#3
sorry if I'm repetitive
I wrote this really late at night, at the same time I was writing music for it so I got a bit boring
but I was aiming for it to rhyme I will try another song not completely rhyming
God bless
Aly