#1
Hey everyone,

Got another song here, it's a little different from what i usually write.

Thanks to Thomasoman (Mike) For making the guitar parts in the chorus.

C4C
Attachments:
Deserted.zip
Poop.


Yes, poop.
#2
Wow. That song is great. . Just wow. The intro was great, in my opinion, and it all flowed together. But the only bit I didn't really like was the interlude..

But still, I loved the song.

9/10

I think I need to listen to more of your songs
#3
Great song. The interlude sounds good and it might work but I don't think the transition to the interlude works well. You might wanna think of another way to lead the song into it.
#4
Quote by metaldud536
Great song. The interlude sounds good and it might work but I don't think the transition to the interlude works well. You might wanna think of another way to lead the song into it.


Well i really have no other way to lead into it. But


Ill try
Poop.


Yes, poop.
#5
Yeah, i'm the rest of these guys. Its a really good song, i really thought that would make an awesome recording,
i think the interlude sounds great, but the start of the interlude doesn't match all that well,
Now i would try and help, but i'm stumped =/ if that tiny little bit was altered somehow, i would happily give that a 10/10, but until then, it'll do for a 9/10. Well written.