#2
Verse would've been cool as only the intro, but then a new riff introduced for the verses.

Making the chorus break into a double time stock drum beat and chugging power chords (not the triplets, but steady 16ths or 8ths) by the rhythm under the leads.

The solo was ace however, very Ammot-y (both of them ). The rhythm for the solo, however...should've been straight 16ths...the stops with the steady drums were too polymetric for this song.

7/10

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cuz ppl hate how power metal they are cuz they think its "gay" or w.e, which is immature and dirogitory