#1
This is going to be part 1 of an epic I'm writing, and this is the only part that's (almost) really finalized.

C4C.
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#2
First bars: very cool

But then you're trying to build suspense, but to me personally, that part's just to slow. I'm like "ok start with the bloody song already". Don't like the drumroll thing.

The chord progression when the song (finally) starts is really good, simple but great. Has a lot of potential, I'll check it out when it's finished.
#3
Quote by ElBarto2811
First bars: very cool

But then you're trying to build suspense, but to me personally, that part's just to slow. I'm like "ok start with the bloody song already". Don't like the drumroll thing.

The chord progression when the song (finally) starts is really good, simple but great. Has a lot of potential, I'll check it out when it's finished.

Hmm, okay. A few people (not on this site) that I've shown them have said actually similar to exact versions of this, heh.

I'll definitely be removing the roll part and be changing some things about the guitar thing.