#1
I stood in the door with a bloody knife
Raised the blade and the slit the throat of life
Because every chance and every breath I take
Is just another ****in door slammed in my face!

I cry yet you shove my face in spit
I try but yet I just cant quit
Every time I look around I see the Earth is ****!
And even if I die Ill be buried in it.
Sometimes I wonder if Im the only mother ****er with a brain
Am I insane?
If I stab them will they feel pain?
Are they even to blame
For my pain
and my shame
And for all of my rage with no aim?

Because every chance and every breath I take
Is just another ****in door slammed in my face!
#7
*reported*

Seriously, read them, and re-think your writing style it just sounds like an angry kid, very cliched, and just tried to hard for shock value, where it's all been heard before....