#1
First song, so please don't be too harsh

Last night two fighters
One of them was alright
The other ones the sorry one
His way or no way
He ain't gonna win it through

He knows that she knows that it ain't his
The lies in his eyes are true

To walk out the room would to be to greet a que
You wouldn't want them to make
An example of you

So you gotta
Get there first
And seize the cup of gold
Before he does

He knows that she knows that it ain't his
The lies in his eyes are true

Your one and only chance
And you've lost it

It has to be
Last edited by timeizprecious at Dec 2, 2008,
#2
Nice, probably needs extending a bit, but very good. I can see the meaning behind it - clear and simple.
#3
The first five lines sound extremely similar to the Artic Monkey's song 'From the Ritz to the Rubble'.
#4
Ohh, I hope there'll be more than just one. Great stuff.
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#5
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The first five lines sound extremely similar to the Artic Monkey's song 'From the Ritz to the Rubble'.



Yeah, definitely a strong influence there....

EDIT: Having read further than the first five lines whereby i was disgusted by your Arctic Monkeys ripoff, the rest of it also sounds extremely familiar from places. 'He knows that she knows'? Kooks by any chance?
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#6
The funny thing is that I don't particulary like The Arctic Monkeys and don't listen to them and the Kooks so regually that i could copy their lyrics